i got this idea 
i think its going to change the world someday
i think it will for real
it will put an end to this worlds alarming rate of decay
its kinda complex 
for all that cant fallow just read the conclusion
and I'm trying to stop my reflux
stopping my self from vomiting sentences just making more confusion
so try to fallow my logic 
and for a moment be a friend not a dick
so here it  goes
sense we were kids we were told to be you
no one else can accomplish what your meant to do
so what im getting at is were all unique
in are own way we are all a freak
so if your you and im me
and thats how it should be
so we arent the same?
so living like it is are bane!
we got different things to learn
and if your trying to learn my lessons no wonder you got heart burn
no wonder you cant sleep at night
no wonder all you want to do is fight
playing by someones else's rule
that's what we fought about in heaven cause its so cruel
we fought so we could keep are agency 
so we could make are own rules and leave a legacy 
find out for your self whats right and wrong
weather that's church, yoga or hitting a bong.
its up to you to choose
and letting some one else decide ,is like playing the lottery, your going to loose 
make your own moral code
stick to it like a car stick to the road
make your own life mission
cast your own vision
dont let any one get in the way
couse its about what you think at the end of day
and once you make your own rules
treat them like jewels
treat others peoples rules for them the same
dont try to put out there flame
CONCLUSION:
think for your self
namaste (look it up)


ruff draft number 1
inspiration is the Hindu in Napal they can look at each other and say this is good for me and my path to enlightenment and that totally different path is the right one for you and truly respect each other as humans and gods (namaste) not hate on the other person for being different and why cant we have that same respect with each other here in america so this September im going over to Napal to try to see what it takes to recognize the god within each other when the gods arent the same.

instructions
first introductions
this is your lawyer
don't lesson and you will meet your destroyer 
do what i say it will save face
and most of all keep you safe
step 1
buy a gun
step 2
make money
step 3
be funny
step 4
make a powerful friend
step 5
when you need to pretend
step 6
find the right girl
step 7
let your plan unfurl
step 8
be great

i remember the days of foot ball at recess when there was no stress when the grade was just going to fade. i remember the song i wrote and all the times out on the boat. i remember my 7th grade crush and how i kept it so hush hush. i remember my 9th grade girl friends and all of there curves and bends. i remember the music i lessened to and all the shit i went through. i remember running to the mountain just to hid from his sin. i remember sitting on my roof above the clouds with my pretty girl i was proud. i remember being runner up and the next year taking the cup. i remember allot but theres more i can not. there are things i would like to remember and there things i would like to forget. but memeroies will come and go just like the sun will rise and the sun will set.

637 views because of 13 visits by the muse nelson you inspired me to become all i am meant to be i found a new love for writing a new way to let my spirit sing and for next year don't change a thing

this mirror on the wall 

show us nothing at all

but this mirror on the lake 

show us whats really and whats fake

this clay on the wheel 

show us how we truely feel

this creative writing class 

sets us apart from the mass

this mirror on the wall 

show us nothing at all

but this mirror in the snow 

will show us where to go

the mirror in are food 

show us are current mood

and the mirror in are dreams 

shows us all it seems

ive said it before and ill say it again
you should write this one with a pen
"are greatest fear isnt that we are inadequate but that we are powerful beyond measure"
you are your  worst enemy
you are your own deputy
you make the rules
you choose to follow fools
you know how great you are
you know if you wanted to be you could be a star
you just have to go for it
hold nothing back not even a little bit
find your passion
treat it with compassion
dont tell your self your not good enough
just becouse the road is ruff
"success is failure turned inside out
the silver tint of the clouds of doubt 
you can never tell how close you are
you might be near when it seems so far
so stick to the fight when your hardest hit
its when things seem worst you must not quite"
i know thats more then one line
but i hope this inspires you to shine

my last post was lame

and I know that so this is me coming back to the game

but really late right now

and im so hungry I could eat a cow

so next will be bomb

so look it up at me .com

Someone else would be like

a dog that could fly a bird that can swim a fish that could walk

its just not going to happen

a writing promt about some else

its impossible but I just asked my girl friend and she said she really liked that writing promt....

she said she would write about her grandpa

I say that by the time I finish I will be a granpa

she said write about some one whos real or fake

but that freakin everyone

so what am I supposed to do

idk so I give up

Death some things I need to get off my chessst

some questions I got to ask

and some things we got to establish before I take off this mask

first I aint scared of you

there aint nothing I cant live through

second it wasnt his time go

and you knew that so thats a low blow

third you invited me so no forming grudges

and neither of us law binding citizens so no need for judges

death how do you decide when its someones time to go

and what if there in the middle of their show

I would understande if the curtin was closed

but what if their play was still being composed

does that change your mind

or to you is that a good find

do you even decide when some one dies

or do you just sit and enjoy the cries

what happenes if they choose you

do you have the power to reject them too

does it hurt to die

or do you just kinda pass on by

finally does it matter if you fall in love

thats all the questions I could think of

space

sorrowful place alone cold empty

space

special place aspiring creative energetic

space

sour place anger contention egregious

space

spectacular place astounding captivating exotic

what it is and and what it will what is has been and what it should be are all nothing alike because space the base of nothing

the total absence of something

no sound no heat no heart beat

a place where a loved one once laid 

a nd there's nothing casting a shadow but it's in the shade

a place where a new will be erected 

a nd the memories of the old deflected 

a placewhere you can be alone and just be

a place where no one can see 

a feeling like no other 

a s true as the love of a mother 

a feeling that could only come in space 

a fear we all share and don't want to face 

“a re greatest fear is not that inadequate but that we powerful beyond believe”

NO

Who made that rule anyway

and who is going to make me fallow it.

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…. but I will add a link back to Paris because I just went on some one's blog that didnt have it and it was annoying ….. but I'm writing it in french.

A NAME AS MUD

pen name: Easy Eddie was Al Capone's lawyer who gave lawyers the name they have today. he cheated lied planted evidence and bribed to get Al Capone off of every charge. he was good at what he did in fact he was the best. then something changed. all he wanted was to give his son a fair shot in life by giving him a good name. he turned in Al Capone. then we skip ahead to his son who he gave a fair shot to in this world, Butch O'hare is most commonly remembered as a war hero who saved an entire fleet of ships. his squad left the ships to run a mission when he realized he didn't have enough fuel to make the mission his leader told him to go back. On his way back he saw Japanese attack planes he took on the whole fleet alone and made them go back because the damage was to heavy. the mission that Butches companions completed was one of the defining point in the war with the Japanese. so much so that they named the Chicago airport after him.

if life is a game,
and lossen is a shame;
then life is made to win,
and you cant play from the sin.
so i stopped brakin all the rules. 
started utilizing all my tools. 
now i'm manifesting my greatest desires, 
and for that i gave up the sacred fires.
gave up all the nonsense. 
now everything i do seems to make sense,
and cents is what i used to make.
now i've got everything at stake:
1 to 36 odds pays 30 to 1,
because i'm number 1, and number 2 dropped out :
that puts me first twice. and that's a nice payout
now number 1 is my ecstasy, 
and i don't sit on, i am the presidency. 
and i'm bringing all my brothers to the same height
because they are the reasons i got through the fight

  im driving home after are first date and it went kinda late but I thought it was great 

and I cant stop thinking about you 

like a wife thinks about a husband thats away

 like an away sales man thinks about his next sale

 like sail think about the next gust of wind

 like when are we going to see each other again

and I hope you thinking about me 

like... ring ring.... a text...

 I hope it is you like a little kids hopes for something cool on christmas.... 

its her she said “I had a good time thank you:)” and im think about what to say back like a wale under a shark attack... 

my phones dies so that makes that one easy

but it stilll doesnt help the fact that im thinking about like water thinks about ice

 like ice thinks about skating

 like skating thinks about rating this hockey player wich you might be dating

and bottom line is I cant stop think about you.

and ive got a case

intro

So what I can’t spell I can say funny stuff and make my point I can write like boss and roll a ….snowball J

This class said creative writing and that’s why we took it; if it said spelling 101, we all would have over looked it

I sometimes write cool line other times I just like rhythms; but its cool I can write other stuff too:

 

Haiku’s are easy;             

,But sometimes they don’t make sense,

Refrigerator

 

It’s cool if you just counted refrigerator on your fingers don’t worry I won’t tell

and this is the taster of my work today; consider the defending side saved: saved by the bell.

 

 

                Whats up my name is essie eddie for every one who doesn’t know who that is, google it.

Im just another kid who never really stands out but still the type that’s willing to throw a shout out

I like to rhythm but I don’t think I need it

ive got a case to win